Project 7 version 2

So I re-edited my typography project because honestly it looked desperate and sad. I tried to differentiate the "voices" a little more by adding color to hope and making less awkward transitions. I got rid of the hideous hand-pegged distortion on the word "REALITY" because it was just dreadful. I also tried to add a little more "bantering" between the hope and reality to show them fighting for space and/or control. I know this would be much better if I had more words which I could possibly add at a later date. For right now I just tried improving by getting rid of the terrible distortion, adding color, and improving the interaction between them where they had none previously.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJ2AefmQu7o